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Matsuoka Rin (松岡 凛 ) ([personal profile] showyouthesight) wrote in [personal profile] tenshinoakuma 2015-11-07 02:44 pm (UTC)

I really like this! I think the tail should be tapered a bit more since that will make it easier to do water things, but that's the only thing I'd really change.

Oh and I think I want to change to Simple Reference since you have nice touches with things like talons, claws, hair+feathers and anything else you think might be worth highlighting.

I also realize I forgot his tattoo on his right hip. You don't have to use that actual design. Just something similar.

Thanks!

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